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(Before I even start this blog/segment I want to express my respect to the author. I am claiming to be no star reporter myself so please do not be offended or angered by what I have typed).Very interesting topic. I agree that Rick Perry is taking much needed health care out of the hands of many Texans. I am all for Presidents Obama`s Health Care reform. Now lets discuss your blog.
Let your voice be heard! The article you picked to support your topic was short but has some very good opinionated content. However, "the authors opinion is the only opinion present. This left me some what confused on your thoughts/point of view about the plan. I would have loved to read more about how you felt and less about how the author of the article felt. This is why you should have a strong stance. A stance is simply one sentence that summarizes the central idea of your topic. By developing a strong stance in your writing ,you can relate your point of view and convince your audience at the same time. If I were against the health care plan you would not convinced me to change my mind the author would have. State your opinion. Make your audience connect with you.
Things to consider. There is just one sentence that I had a hard time understanding. "With the governor trying to stop this form happening may start a lot of disputes with his re election." "a lot" should be alot and the authors credibility speaks for itself because you retrieved the article from a credible source so you may want to omit that sentence or the few words talking about the authors credibility. I enjoyed reading you blog.